On the Essays

I am going to chose my my second essay to chop into because it is much more resolved in the revelations. I feel that I have come to the concept of the story more clearly in this one and I will be able to work into it better then if I were to try to hone the first one.

Secondly, while I was writing this one I was able to come to many conclusions of a very personal and very recent event in my families life. It was almost an unconscious free-flowing draft that allowed me to figure out how I truly felt about the situation yet write it literary.

The essay felt like a resolution to a ghost and that has been haunting the corners of my house. I allowed my mother to read it and she was touched and others who were effected by the situation also wanted to read it. I am hoping to make it better so that other families who go through addiction can read it and feel the understanding and pain as well.

Well...here is to making it the most incredible fantastical best written essay ever!! hahahaaaa